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This is a very appealing blog. You have clearly worked well together as a team and have contributed effectively all the required work as well as your own personal creativity.
You had a conscientious blog technician, who changed the appearance. A very good idea to include useful links within the blog. Why not build on these to include some language links to dictionaries, grammar help etc?
Also a good idea to have a theme which unites you all, which is anime. I loved the work on cosplay. This was a good example of you taking the initiative.
You also commented well on each other’s work despite all the sad endings to Carapace!!
Lots of creative writing and full interviews in many cases. Makes for interesting reading. Images with captions, dedications. Lovely visuals to support your creative writing text.
Build on more of your own creative writing next semester.
Allyson
You had a conscientious blog technician, who changed the appearance. A very good idea to include useful links within the blog. Why not build on these to include some language links to dictionaries, grammar help etc?
Also a good idea to have a theme which unites you all, which is anime. I loved the work on cosplay. This was a good example of you taking the initiative.
You also commented well on each other’s work despite all the sad endings to Carapace!!
Lots of creative writing and full interviews in many cases. Makes for interesting reading. Images with captions, dedications. Lovely visuals to support your creative writing text.
Build on more of your own creative writing next semester.
Allyson
