The Mysterious Hitchhiker - continuation of version 2
Carlo wondered where the girl had gone and if he was going to find her again. He was very excited when he met the girl.A few days later, being unable to forget the girl and still remembering her beautiful but delicate figure, Carlos went to the same place where he took the girl. He found an old woman that made him have pity by the clothes that she was wearing. He noticed that the old woman was miserable and, in her eyes, there was only sadness. In spite of that appearance, he wasn't afraid and had the courage to ask the old woman about the girl's description and where he could find her.
The old woman was extremely shocked by his requests and started to cry when she began to reply. She told that the girl was her niece who used to live there but she had already died a few years ago and that she couldn't believe his story. She said that it was better if he would never appear again in that place and that she didn't like his bad joke.
He was very upset with the old woman but after a few minutes, when he was returning to his home, he started to think more about her words. He didn't know what had happened exactly on that night. It wasn't supposed to happen. "Why did it happen?", Carlo wondered.
Three months later, Carlo went to the cemetery to put some white daisies on his mother's grave. She had died a year ago and he was the only person that appeared to remember and miss his mother's soul. As he was leaving the cemetery, he noticed his jacket on another gravestone. He stopped to consider the bizarre situation for a few seconds and, with abrupt movements, he picked his jacket up, and was starting to run away when he saw the photograph more easily that had taken all the mystery away: the photograph showed the same girl that he had given a lift to. After that, he never forgot her...
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Very scary...
I really don't like scary stories because I'm very sensitive to them :P
But I can recognise it as a good one :)
Posted by
Geossara Costa |
1/27/2007 2:32 pm
Thank you very much! =D
I thought that this story wasn't scary! lol
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Posted by
Joana Carlos |
1/27/2007 11:04 pm