The mysterious hitchhiker
The scary next day…
A narrow street that seems to never end… a mysterious smile… a dark doorway… a whisper… “Come… don’t leave me alone… please!!”
Carlo woke up scared, everything was spinning around. What was that dream?
The mysterious encounter with that girl the day before seemed normal before, so why was him having that dream?
Confused, he started thinking about it, the sad looking girl, the thin dress she was wearing on a cold day…
Something inside was telling him not to go, but he wanted to now, he wanted to see her again and find out if that pale and beautiful face was really that scary.
Although hesitating, he left the room and entered the car. It was a really cold day… where did he put his jacket? Oh that’s true… he gave it to the girl… now he had a reason to look for her… Wait… what was that?
Something or somebody was standing by the side of the road. Carlo pulled and slowly walked to the known figure.
When he got close to her, she slowly turned around.
“DON’T LEAVE ME ALONE!!!”
It was no longer a whisper and the face was no longer the same.
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In my opinion, your text of the misterious girl is the best of all that I read on our blog!
Good work! ;) I liked a lot!
Posted by
Joana Carlos |
1/27/2007 12:09 am
Great!!! You could be writing horror storys :P eheh (so that I could not read them, since I'm afraid... At least I'm afraid of horror movies... Books, I've never tried one... Someday (or not xD) =)
Posted by
deviousmind |
1/27/2007 2:54 pm
There's no reason to be afraid of what you don't undersand. but, if you do, fight it. You'll feel much better in the end, i'm sure.
"a poet in the making here!"
great work xD
Posted by
Anonymous |
1/27/2007 9:40 pm
I love horror stories. =D Nice work!
Posted by
Kalisheedra |
1/28/2007 10:53 pm